Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Full Expressions Needed In Religion - Ref: Anilnetto - Malaysiakini

What 'Herald' is doing right now is 'sticking to religion'
To freely live up to expectations with full life's expressions
It has to let its light shine before all earthly legions
To lift all of earth's peoples up from their depressions

(C) Samuel Goh Kim Eng - 230708
Wed. 23rd July 2008.

1 comment:

The said...

/// Samuel Goh Kim Eng Says:
Yesterday at 22: 14.48

How can anyone be so cruelly condemned
Even before being charged in court?
How can a country’s image be redeemed
With so many strange conducts to court? ///

Samuel, Samuel your verses are a form of pollution
Once in a while, it can pass off as a diversion
But seeing your verses contort in convolution
Just to try to put a few lines in assonance

Condemned doesn’t even rhyme with redeemed
Looks like you are trying too hard and losing steam
And of course court will rhyme with court
Clever lines, witty verses they certainly are not.